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"Restated Thesis" help for my thesis? :[?
SGDSFDSQ!
i'm incredibly frustrated with my english essay!
i'm writing my outline, and i've written my thesis and body paragraphs, and now all i have left is my restated thesis. however, with a thesis as boring as mine, i don't exactly know how to restate it without sounding stupid.
thesis: "Orange, yellow, green, and black; each of these colors represent some essence of *******'s character in one or multiple ways."
and, ahahahaha, don't worry. minus the thesis, my introductory has a little more zing to it.
"Orange, yellow, green, and black all represented some facet of ____'s character. Each one of these character traits help to complete the picture of ____ as a _____ (ex: kind, caring, independent, tough) person who _____ (what's the point-- where do these attributes get the character-- what kind of lesson can be learned-- what's the point of the story?) - ex: persevered in the face of adversity.
For restating the thesis in the last paragraph you want to make some all-encompassing statement about the character that ties the character's attributes into the larger theme of the story/ or the larger theme of life in general the audience should walk away with
For example, make one final statement about the character. Ex- ___ (character's name) is _____ (independent or whatever attribute), which the author demonstrates in four different ways through four different colors. (say black stood for ____, yellow represented the character's ___ this, etc.-- what I said above)
And follow with something like- this is important to the theme of the story because...
It's like, okay, yellow means this, orange means this, etc., but what does this all that mean, in the larger picture? what is one statement that can sum up why the author did this- what he was attempting to show the audience by revealing these attributes? (It can be as simple as a one sentence explanation)
hope this helps 
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